πŸ”Š Married Agents (William & Hope) - Ignite Story

Hope began to shout, "William Robert Parker, you better finish me right this..." -- To see the rest of the story, please

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    • JAM777 says:

      Thank you so much Mrs. G!! That means a lot coming from you!
      And don't worry, there will be more. I have plans to create my own little universe on here. Similar to what Ittlb has done.

      I plan to have the next part or two done by the weekend. Then I plan to do one with different people but from the same "universe."

      If they catch on enough, I will continue on with a separate part that will be from the same universe but will be of the next generation. But we shall see what happens! πŸ™‚

  1. PatientPassion says:

    Nicely written, JAM! I didn't feel like it was too long. The pacing was good, and I enjoyed it!

    Nothing stands out to me as a glaring error, but I think it might have been nice to have more than one brief mention of the "mission" they are on. The story was plenty entertaining even without that extra detail, but you might think about adding more about that if you're going to base the title of the story on it! πŸ™‚

    Overall it was very enjoyable. You have me looking forward to part 2!

    • JAM777 says:

      Thank you so much Passion!
      It is quite enjoyable working on the "universe" for this.

      I was taking some notes while reading other "agent style" books.

      And yeah, that's what an MH Admin said concerning encompassing more of the mission.
      I was struggling with finding a balance but I think I have it now.

      I'll finish up the night with Will and Hope, then get back into the "main" plot.

      Thank you so much for the encouragement and advice!
      "Hope" you enjoy the next part! I know I "will" enjoy writing it! πŸ™‚

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