The Advent Calendar – Part 2: The Note (A/L)
(A) – This story contains anal play.
(L) – This story contains strong language.
* Additionally, this story contains intense BDSM/kink play, including pain play.
Read Part 1 of the story here.
Le Calendrier de L’avent – The Advent Calendar
Part 2: The Note
7 Décembre
2 Décembre: Blindfold.
3 Décembre: Cinnamon Tiger Balm.
4 Décembre: Large bag of rice.
5 Décembre: Black leather collar and a lead.
6 Décembre: Anal plug (6cm x 2cm).
The black envelope sat on the table all day. A shoebox-sized black box sat beneath it, covered in the same gold Paisley swirls that all of his advent calendar gifts had been wrapped in.
Gabriel’s wonky handwriting was scratched on the face of the envelope face. The message of messy gold-penned letters was simple and yet annoyingly intriguing.
“7 Décembre, ouvre moi à 5h”
‘Open me at 5’ was a simple instruction. However, because Andrea was now not allowed to open it, it was a conscious presence all day. Not knowing was maddening. When she went for her coffee, it was there; when she sat to eat her lunch, it was there; when she dropped the mail in the basket in the kitchen, it was there.
As 5 pm approached, she found herself in the kitchen pouring a glass of Beaujolais, staring at it. She could feel the butterflies in her stomach as she once again glanced at the note, then the clock on the wall, and back at the note.
4:58
Andrea looked nervously at the clock again.
4:59
Her stomach was in knots, and she could feel the sweat beading on her forehead. She glanced back at the note and noticed the time had changed.
4:59:30
Her breathing quickened, and she looked back at the clock.
4:59:35
She took a deep breath.
4:59:47
A smile grew on her face.
5:00:00
“Here goes,” she said under her breath.
Reaching for the envelope, she picked open the envelope and peered in. She extracted the black note, unfolded it, and read the instructions, which were also written in gold lettering.
“7 Décembre: Place the Balm, Rice, Collar, Lead and Plug on the table. Then send me a photo to prove you have done as I requested.”
Her heart quickened at the idea of so many exciting items. Quickly, she did as the note instructed: she retrieved the items from the package under the note, laid them out on the kitchen table, took a picture with her phone, and sent it to Gabriel. Only moments later, she stared at the three dots bobbling in the chat, waiting anxiously as he typed his next instruction.
“Strip completely, place the blindfold over your eyes securely, and kneel by the door. I need a photo prove you have done as I asked.”
Andrea smiled, and her heart began to race.
“Oui Sir,” she texted back.
She took her time, removing her clothes, folding them, and placing them in a neat pile in the kitchen. She skipped to the hall and slipped the blindfold over her forehead. Holding the phone in one hand, she angled it so it showed her kneeling on the floor. Then she replaced the blindfold over her eyes and snapped the picture. She lifted the blindfold just enough to send the picture. The phone made its whoosh sound, and she replaced the blindfold. As the seconds ticked away, the butterflies in her stomach multiplied, and her mind raced.
Andrea felt a little strange, naked and blindfolded, alone in her own home. But she did as Gabriel had asked, kneeling in the doorway, her knees on the cold, hardwood floor. She waited, her body trembling with anticipation.
Unsure how long she had been kneeling, it was a pleasant relief to hear the keys jingle in the lock and the door open and close.
“Good girl,” Gabriel praised as he stood looking at her.
“Thank you, Sir.”
He walked over and crouched down.
“You are magnificent.”
“Thank you, Sir,” Andrea said again.
He reached out and cupped her face with his hand, stroking her cheek.
“You are also a very obedient girl.”
“Yes, Sir.” the compliment sent the heat rushing between her legs.
Gabriel did not remove the blindfold. He walked past her, and she could hear him fumbling behind her.
First, she heard the scrape of the collar slide across the table. The lead dropped to the floor with a thud. She felt him stand behind her and carefully wrapped the leather around her neck and fastened it tightly.
“Safety word,” he said.
“Marmaduke, Sir,” she whispered. It was the word that would bring all this to an end if it ever became to much for her. She had never had a need to use it, but simply knowing it was there was a huge comfort in their play.
He leaned down and kissed her neck, just below the collar.
“Good girl.”
He took the lead in his hand and walked down the corridor, gently pulling her along, still unable to see. As he led her, the lead would tighten around her neck and restrict her breathing.
“Uhh!”
“Are you okay, chérie?”
“Yes, Sir, thank you.”
“Good.”
Once they were both at the end of the hallway, he stopped.
“Stand,” he commanded.
“Yes, Sir.”
Andrea stood up, and Gabriel pulled her lead so her body was flush against his. He kissed her neck and slid his hand down her back. He gave her a light slap on the arse.
“Ah!”
He slapped her again, and Andrea cried out.
“Spread your legs, pet,” he said.
“Yes, sir.”
“Wider.”
Andrea spread her legs wider, and her pussy became more exposed.
“Good girl.”
As she stood with her legs apart, her arms hung loosely at her sides, her breathing becoming shallow. She felt him step forward, and he pressed his body against hers. She desperately wanted to kiss him and leant forward to find his lips. She felt the sting of his plan smack her mound, and she winced in pain.
“Did I say you could kiss me, Pet?”
“No, Sir.”
“Are you excited?”
“Yes, Sir,” she whimpered, “very excited.”
He pulled her hair and yanked her head back.
“Mmm…” she moaned.
“Do you want to see me?”
“Yes, please, Sir,” she moaned.
“What do you want to see?”
“Your… cock, Sir.”
“You want to see my cock?”
“Yes, please, Sir.”
Gabriel let go of the lead, and she felt him step away.
“Stand against the wall,” he commanded.
Andrea moved back and stood with her back against the wall. She did not know where Gabriel was or what he was doing, which added to the excitement. She could hear him walking, his feet slapping on the hardwood floor, and her mind went wild. She wanted him to touch her, to take her, to dominate her, and it drove her crazy.
She could hear him approach, and he pulled the lead again.
“Ahhh…”
“Turn around and bend over, Pet.”
“Yes, Sir.”
Andrea turned around and bent over, her ass exposed.
“Legs wider.”
She spread her legs and felt the cold air hit her.
“That’s better, now, stay like that.”
“Yes, Sir.”
As the words left her mouth, she felt him slide a toy into her wet, gaping pussy. It must have been the plug from the box, she guessed. He turned it inside her.
“Oh!” she gasped.
“That’s a good girl.”
Gabriel thrust it in and out as she grasped the walls for balance.
“Ahhh!” she moaned.
“Take it!”
He thrust it into her again and pulled the lead, which tightened around her neck.
“Ughhh!” she groaned.
“Take it, slut.”
“Ohhhhh….”
“Bend down lower and hold your ankles,” he commanded.
Part of Gabriel’s training was to get Andrea more supple by having her join yoga and pilates classes. She was now flexible enough to do a downward dog and reach her ankles. She did as she was instructed. Gabriel extracted the toy from her pussy and moved it to her arse. He rimmed it over her hole before sliding it inside.
“Ahhhh….Sir.”
“You are a very good girl.”
Gabriel slid the toy out of her arse and then pressed it back in. It was somewhat lubricated from her pussy, but not quite enough for smooth entry. Andrea felt the pain as the penetration pulled and pinched her bum.
Gabriel began to orbit the toy gently in slow circulations. Andrea was feeling lightheaded when she felt him spank her bum cheeks with his palm.
“Uhhh… Sir,”
He slid the toy from her arse and placed his thumb in. He rotated it around inside her, loosening her tight ring.
“Do you want me to fuck you?”
“Please, Sir, yes, please,” Andrea begged.
“Ask for my cock.”
“Please, Sir, give me your cock.”
“Tell me what you want.”
“I want your cock, Sir,” she pleaded.
“Ask for my cock.”
“Please, Sir, can I have your cock?”
“Where?”
“My pussy, please, Sir.”
Gabriel stepped forward and pulled her hips back until his erection rested between her legs. Andrea reached out to support herself against the wall.
“Here?”
“Yes, Sir!” she pleaded.
“No, I don’t think you deserve it, Pet! Turn around! Kneel,” he ordered.
“Yes, Sir,” she stuttered.
Andrea knelt, and as she did, she heard Gabriel walk to the end of the hall.
“If my Pet wants to get fucked, Pet will crawl in her hands and knees and come to me.”
Andrea was still blindfolded as she began to feel her way on her hands and knees along the corridor.
The first crunch of the uncooked rice beneath your bare hands and knees startled her with its sharpness. The grains dug into your skin, petite, jagged discomfort points pressing against your palms and knees. As she scuttled forward, the pain intensified. Each movement forced more weight onto the rice, the individual grains imprinting onto her flesh with every inch forward.
“Slower,” Gabriel said.
The cold, hard floor beneath the rice added to the sensation, a steady reminder of the unyielding surface she was crawling across. The texture of the rice became more distinct with every movement: gritty, uneven, and relentless. It was not just the sharp pain but also a constant, dull ache that built as she moved further down the hallway.
Her knees felt bruised, her hands throbbed, and her skin raw from the constant pressure. Sharp and pulsating pain shot through her body with every crawl, but she pushed through it. Every foot felt longer than the last. Every inch forward became a battle between the stinging pain and her determination to please her master. Unsure of how far she had crawled, her mind played tricks on her. The hallway stretching out in front of her was seemingly endless.
The sensation became a rhythm, her shallow and strained breath, the sound of the rice shifting under her weight, and the biting pain reminding her of each moment, each step closer to the end.
She felt the leash become taught, pulling her face upwards.
“Good girl,” Gabriel said.
Andrea’s skin felt ablaze. Every inch of her body throbbed and tingled from the intense sensations.
“Are you okay, ma chérie?”
“Oui.”
“Good girl.”
He pulled the lead, and his fingertips brushed her lips, smearing her lipstick across her cheek. She felt the sting of his palm across her face, and she winced quietly. Another two smacks harder than the first followed in quick succession. The pleasure in the pain sent shivers down her spine to the toy still embedded in her arse. Each stroke of his palm on her face required her to steady her posture, the rice pressing harder into her knees.
“Thank you, Sir.”
“Good girl,” he said, stroking her face gently.
He slapped her again and again, the pain intensifying. With every strike, she winced, the toy inside her shifting slightly. She was desperate for his cock, and she wanted to touch him, to taste him, and to please him.
“Sir, may I please have your cock?”
“Beg,” he said, smacking her once more.
“Please, Sir, your putain needs Master’s cock.”
“More.”
“Please, Sir, please,” she pleaded, “please, I want to suck your cock, please, Sir!”
Gabriel stepped forward and yanked her by the hair.
“Open your mouth,” he growled.
Andrea obeyed, and he shoved his cock into her mouth. Her tongue wrapped around his shaft, and she sucked him, the taste of his precum sending her into a frenzy.
“Ugh…” he groaned.
He began to move faster, fucking her face. Andrea felt the pain in her scalp as her hair was pulled. She moaned around his cock, the vibrations sending him into a frenzy.
“Ugh…fuck…!” he moaned, pulling the lead and making her take him deeper into her mouth.
His hips bucked, and he shoved his dick deeper into her mouth. She felt the head of his cock press against the back of her throat, and she gagged, her eyes watering. He began to thrust harder, and she moaned louder.
“Fuuuck…” he cried. “Oh god…yes…” he growled, his grip tightening. “Gaaaaahh!!!”
Andrea’s eyes rolled back, and she choked on his dick. He continued to fuck her face, his hips bucking.
“Oh… oh God… uhhh!”
He pulled the leash, forcing her head up, and she felt his cock slide deeper into her throat.
“Ughhh!”
Andrea began to feel lightheaded. Gabriel continued to thrust harder, his pace becoming more erratic. She felt his dick throb in her mouth, and she knew he was close.
“Oh god…” he moaned, “I’m going to cum!”
He pulled the leash tighter, and her neck was stretched painfully, her knees on the rice delivering a shearing pain through her body and into her dripping mound. Every thrust made the toy move inside her arse, her nipples erected with the pain-pleasure that was becoming unbearable.
“Uhhh…”
Gabriel pulled the leash tighter, his hand grabbing her hair.
“Ugh! Fuuuck!”
“Ooh!”
“Mmmph!”
“OH GOD!!!”
Andrea felt his cum. The hot, thick, salty fluid spilling into her mouth. Her body convulsed as she tried to swallow.
“Ahhh…”
“Ugh….”
“Mmmph…”
“Mmmm…!”
Gabriel collapsed forward, his hands on the floor. He panted heavily, his body shuddering.
“God, dieu,” he whispered, his voice hoarse. “You’re such a precious slut.”
Gabriel continued to fuck Andrea all afternoon. He used her as his sex toy until his thirst for her was quenched. Gabriel edged her until her body ached for release, but Andrea was not allowed to cum.
At least, not until…




This is absolutely beautiful and you’ve described the scene wonderfully. I love the balance between pleasure and pain, and I also love his denial of your own pleasure.
I can’t wait to read what leads up to him letting you cum 😉
Thanks for sharing, and I’m looking forward to part 3!
Thank you, KingdomMan!
You’re always so kind with your commentary, and it means a lot.
Lauren isn’t feeling well, so she asked me to check in with the comments. She’d be happy to hear your feedback!
This is split into four parts, so there’s more to come.
Merci, Joe.
The portion of her being made to beg for her husband’s physical ravishing is touching a part of me that does the same with my husband. Laid bare, made to beg for the need within my heart to be claimed and thoroughly enjoyed by the one man who deserves to!
Wondrous job, Ms Lauren!
Dear SophTea,
Thank you so much for your kind words!
Lauren worked incredibly hard on this series, and even though she's currently unwell, I know your thoughtful comments will make her smile.
As her Dom, it brings me great joy to hear how much she desires me when she begs, and I’m sure your Sir feels the same way about your devotion.
It's beautiful to see the connection and deep desire between you and your husband, as well.
Merci, Joe
Very erotic writing. I like the part that Grabreil made Andrea suffered by making her wait her desires. For example; defining time to open the package, begging for cock. This is something me and my partner do, making the other suffer, it gives a lot of pleasure. But we don’t have Anal experience, how does that feel? I like to know.
Maxi
Thank you for your kind words! I love that you and your partner play with anticipation and control, it adds such an intoxicating edge to pleasure.
As for anal, it’s definitely a journey! It took time, trust, and a lot of patience to get comfortable with it. The key is relaxation, communication, and, of course, plenty of lube. There’s a mix of intensity and deep sensation that can be incredibly satisfying when done right. If you're curious, taking it slow and enjoying the build-up makes all the difference. Pleasure comes in many forms, and exploring new ones together is part of the fun!
Love lauren