The Evaluation, Part 4: Intercourse

This story has some strong language (L).  Links marked with * are affiliate links; full disclosure.

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Melody and Tom’s Doctor-client role play continued:

Melody had just given Dr. Thomas Lynn, MD, Ph.D. the best blow job of his life. She had surprised him when she slipped on an open cup, open crotch teddy, and then kneeled next to the bed, where he was lying nude. She had given him a breathtaking session of oral sex/fellatio, but she had not brought him to climax. It had all been intense foreplay.

Melody was being evaluated on her various sexual skills, sexual responses, and on specific parts of her curvy body. The evaluation incorporated some sexual training, and there would be a write-up in a few days that would include the doctor’s suggestions. But so far, Dr. Lynn had shared very few suggestions.

In fact, even though they had only met that day, Melody was already on a first-name basis with “Tom,” the MD and Sexologist. He had already given her very high ratings in several sexual skills, and he also gave her high points for how her body was reacting to sexual stimulation. So Melody was feeling very confident.  She was doing HER best because she was competitive and wanted a high score, but she was having a LOT of sexy fun too!

After the BJ, Melody climbed back on the bed and assumed the Cuissade position. This was the sexual position that she had chosen at the start of the evaluation, with her lying on her back. So Tom lay down on his side perpendicularly and lined his large cock’s head up with her pussy. Before he penetrated her vagina, he remembered to score her for the blow job.

“Full points on fellatio!” he said.

Melody giggled. “You’d better say that!”

Tom began the sexual intercourse by first holding his shaft and stroking Melody’s labia and clit with his engorged glans.

“That feels really nice!” Melody said at first. Then, as it went on and on, she began to feel impatient. “You’re teasing me,” she whined, then demanded, “Just go inside me! My pussy WANTS you inside her!” Then she pushed her pelvis forward and spread her pussy lips open even wider.

Tom leaned up to look at the moist pussy that was being presented to him. “What a beautiful sight!” he exclaimed, then added, “You really do have a beautiful pussy!”

“You like my pussy?” asked Melody with a hungry look in her eyes. “You of all men would know a good pussy when you saw it.”

“Yes, I’ve seen a lot of pussies and nude female bodies. And yours is the most beautiful to me of all I’ve ever seen!” said Tom as his eyes stared at her pussy, then raked up and down her quivering form before returning to her beautiful pussy.

Melody was so turned on she was shaking. “Then get inside me NOW!” she demanded.

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“Love to,” said Tom, but first he sat up and, from the selection on the nightstand, grabbed three vibes for Melody to choose from. She chose a bullet vibe. * While he was kneeling up next to her, Tom got an idea; he returned to doing tip-on nip once more. Melody buzzed her clitoris, and based on her sighs, she enjoyed Tom’s tip rubbing on her tit even more than before.

Then Tom moved up closer to his client’s sexy face. She looked like an aroused 25-year-old chick. He pointed his cock at her mouth, and she flexed her jaw, then opened her small, pretty mouth wide and began another blow job of Tom’s huge dick. This time—because of the position—she could only take half of his cock into her mouth.

But the blow job was intense and wonderful. Tom watched his cock go in and out of Melody’s pretty little mouth and felt the stimulation of her lips and tongue again!

“Ohhhh, you are so good at that!” Tom said with a pleasurable moan. “Still a five out of five on fellatio!” he added.

Tom knew that he could easily cum on his client’s boobs, in her mouth, or on her face. He even thought about it. But the next portion of the evaluation had to happen in full sexual intercourse.  He also remembered her request to have him come in her vagina… so he slid back down into the perpendicular Cuissade position.

As Tom began slowly working his dick into her pussy, Melody applied the tip of the vibe to her clitoris and quietly began to moan. “Mmmmm… I love your Fred in my pussy! That’s more like it!”  (Fred was her nickname for her husband’s erection.)

Tom slid his full length into her pussy and paused. “Your pussy is so tight! And you have a long, deep pussy too!! he said. “Much longer than average. It can accommodate my full length!” Then he began thrusting from deep to shallow. “I love fucking your pussy!” he exclaimed. “Do you like to have my big dick fucking your pussy?”

“YES!” she gasped out. Then she activated her Kegal muscles, squeezing Tom’s cock as hard as she could. She remembered that there were points for Kegal muscle squeeze strength, so still wanting a high score, she really did her best.  Besides, it felt good to make HIM feel good.

“I feel that!” exclaimed Tom. “A five rating for Kegal squeezes!”

Melody smiled. She was proud of herself. She always strived to excel, and the evaluation really had become a challenge for her to get a high score. “It’s fun to squeeze you,” she said as her ultimate hug on Tom’s erection continued… and became even stronger!

The sexual intercourse went on for some time. Tom wanted to give Melody as much pleasure as possible. Melody wanted to give Tom maximum pleasure as well, so as he pumped into her tight pussy, she pushed back. Then they would take a rest without Tom’s cock leaving her tight pussy. They both reached over to stimulate a nipple on their sex partner. They went on and off this way for some time.

Finally, Tom remembered that in her registration survey, Melody had said she usually needed semen ejaculated inside her pussy, and that she was able to ignore her back pain if her nipples were sucked and titillated afterward. Thus, she was usually able to come if she was full of cum, used a vibrator, and her nips were stimulated. Tom realized he needed to give her those experiences—and he was ready! Melody’s caressing pussy was driving him wild, and yet he was careful not to ram his pelvis into Melody’s pelvic region. He was fucking her fast, but not pounding her.

Melody was in nirvana. Tom’s cock rammed way up inside without her pelvis being hit. This was helping keep her back pain from getting too severe, something she would have to commend to her husband. So Tom’s dick had her writhing in pleasure, even as she repeated Kegal hugs to his big dick. It really felt good up inside her. What a rare statistical coincidence it was for Dr. Lynn, the physician, and Tom her husband to both have large, pussy-pleasing dicks. And her pussy was indeed pleased.

“Thank you, thank you!” she found herself repeating as the doctor’s lovemaking pace increased. She was astonished at how good this all had felt. “Yes! YES! Like that! Don’t stop!” she cried out.

Tom also was astonished that this woman was so good at sex. He couldn’t really think of the evaluation numbers because she had him in a state of absolute sexual ecstasy. But he could hold off no longer. “I’m about to cum!” he gasped out.

“YES!” shouted Melody. Cum in my pussy! I want my present deep up inside my pussy!”

So Tom let go. He HAD been holding his orgasm. He increased the speed until he was thrusting into Melody’s tight pussy at an even more frantic pace.

Melody gasped at the increased pleasure. And to be honest, she was very relieved that Tom was a lively lover who did NOT pound his pelvis into hers. That had hurt her messed up lower back in the past. She kept the Kegal pressure on as she mused, and she heard Tom grunt and say, “I’m cumming in your pussy!” That pussy was in a state of pre-orgasmic throbbing as she gave Tom the ultimate hug with her Kegals.

He exploded up inside her, thrusting in very deep and holding still as his orgasm engulfed his nervous system in an electrical storm. “How can ANYTHING or ANYBODY feel this good?” he asked himself. But aloud, he said, “Oh, Melody, you are a great fuck! That was the best sex of my life!”

“You better say that!” laughed Melody, and the laughter triggered more pleasurable Kegal squeezes on Tom’s receding cock.

Tom’s erection slid out, and he quickly scooped some of the cum from Melody’s pussy and rubbed it on her hard nipples. Then he began licking it off and sucking her titties hard. Melody buzzed her clit again with her vibrator. In fact, she’d never stopped buzzing her clit.

“Mmmmmm!” said Tom, “Pussy juice, man-cream, coconut oil, and Cherry Lemonade*… so delicious licking it off your perfect raspberry-shaped tits!”

“You like that!” stated Melody as she pushed a boob up with her free hand for Tom to get a better hold on the tittie. (Her other hand still held the bullet vibe to her clitoris.)

“There’s something about my pussy full of cum that just turns me on!” thought Melody as she felt her arousal continue to rise. “It would be an exponential rise on a graph,” her science mind thought.  Then she reached the high vortex and gasped out in the husky voice she only had when extremely sexually aroused, “I’m cumming!”

As her orgasmic spasms took over her body, she was acutely aware of Tom’s mouth sucking hard on her left nipple as he pinched her right one firmly. Her scientific mind sometimes equated her orgasms to an earthquake, and this orgasm was a 9.5 on the Richter scale.

Tom heard Melody announce her orgasm, and he loved the sound of her aroused voice. It was deep and raspy, and Tom thought it was very fascinating. He watched her with one eye and marveled that now she looked like a horny 20-year-old.

“You are so amazingly beautiful!” said Tom, when he stopped his ministrations on her nips and looked down into her big, beautiful Nordic eyes. He gave her a long kiss. “That was the best sex I’ve ever had, Melody! Thank you!” Then he smiled and added, “If I thought you’d lied on the forms about your age, I would REALLY think so now. You look like a young bride on her honeymoon!”

Melody could not answer yet as she was experiencing orgasmic aftershocks of pleasure.

When Melody had come down, Tom suddenly (and humorously) looked concerned. “We forgot to evaluate your nipple stimulation skills! I mean your stimulation of male nipples.”

“We DID forget,” stated Melody. “Well, move over to my right side, and we’ll give you a chance for you to complete your evaluation.”

To make a very long story short or at least shorter… Melody licked and tongue-flicked Tom’s nipples while she pumped his re-hardened cock with one hand. Then he finished with him pumping himself to another intense orgasm as his client sucked hard on his left man-nipple.

“That’ll be a five on male nipple stimulation and manual erection stimulation as well,” said Tom with a satisfied smile. He had sprayed cum all over both of them, including some on her boobs, her cheek, her leg, his torso, his arms, and his chin.

Tom helped Melody up and off the bed. “We can step in the shower to help each other clean up,” suggested Tommy– as if he were the fictional Dr. Tom Lynn. “How is your back feeling, Ms. Mitchell?”

“Tommy!” said Melody, “Don’t get all formal on me. We just shared some of the best lovemaking of our marriage! Thank you for going to all this effort.” She gave him a truly grateful smile and a kiss, then answered his question. “My back feels surprisingly fine.”

“Thank YOU for playing along so nicely!” said Tom, “That was wonderful!” They kissed again and both said a muffled, “I love you!” during the kiss. Both were so happy that they were married to each other.

Melody’s back surgery was three days away.

Epilogue:
Yes, this was just a role-play. It is clearly ridiculous and neither of us would ever entertain even the possibility of sex with anyone but each other. This was basically a very erotic acting game that got our minds, bodies, and hormones REALLY turned on!

Below is the filled-out questionnaire with “Melody’s” evaluation. Below that is the blank questionnaire if you would want to try this or a similar role-play with your spouse. Of course, our questions are unique to us so maybe let our form be a guide for making your own.

By the way, our bedroom really does have halite lamps. We DO have a TV located beyond the foot of the bed, and we DO often turn on a YouTube fireplace video with Spanish guitar music when we make love. For this roleplay, I left a bedside lamp on as well so that “Dr. Tom” could read and mark Melody’s “evaluation.” I did use a camera to film some of this and to take some photos; I used the private photos and video app on my phone. Plus we do have many sex toys. I lay some of them out on my nightstand before we have a sex session, and I DO call them our “buffet of love.” I also am an amateur artist, and I sometimes draw nudes, so I HAVE seen a lot of nude bodies. one live posing session of a nude, plus photos and drawings of other nudes.  Full disclosure, the live nude drawing session was of my wife.

The sex and lovemaking that we had in this role play were just as real and just as phenomenal as it is portrayed in the story with very little embellishment other than the necessary character of the receptionist/medical assistant and a few minor things. Somehow my wife just goes wild in role-play sex.  So YES this is a true story.  But it was also a husband and wife doing a role-play, and we always knew that the sex play and sex were with and for each other. We felt both closer to each other and grateful to our Creator for us to have the wonderful friendship, love, sexual relationship, and this sexual encounter with each other in such a fun and intense way.  During the role-play, we used the fictional names for each other that I use in my writing on MH.

One other useful thing that “came” out of the role-play was my remembering to be careful during intercourse so I don’t jar Melody’s sore back. We can still be intense with fast deep thrusts but colliding my pubic bones into hers is out for the foreseeable future. This will be helpful when she has recovered enough from her back surgery for us to resume sex.

Please let us know in the comments what you thought of this sexy role-play.

The follow-up visit is the last story in this role-play series, and it really happened too. It occurred two days later, the day before Melody’s back surgery. That story will be “cumming” up soon!

Note:  Below is the questionnaire we used in the role play.  This one is all filled out.  I filled it out in pencil during and right after our role-play but I typed it up for this MH post.

 

Lynn Intimacy Inc.

 

FULL SEXUAL EVALUATION  filled out

 

This form to be filled out by doctor during evaluation.

 

Client _Melody Mitchell__

Age 71  Birthday 12/14/1951 

Gender Male / Female

     Note: This form is for females only.

 

Relationship status:   

    ___Single not dating   

    ___Single with sig. other

    _X_Married

     ___Divorced 

     ___Sexually active  Y / N

 

Prefer partner to use condom today Y / N  (She changed her mind during intercourse,)

Preference for where semen is ejaculated 

Mark all that have applied in the past or 

     that you would like to do today

    __ Vagina (in “pussy”)

    ___In mouth during stand alone oral     

    ___In mouth after intercourse 

    ___On face

    ___In external female genitalia (pussy) 

    ___On tummy

    ___On Breasts

    _X_In condom

 

Sex positions you have enjoyed 

In Past _Missionary position, Doggy Style/rear entry,   Cowgirl, bent over in shower, & Cuissade

 

Sex positions you would like to do today

____Only Cuissade___________

____________________________

____________________________

 

Health Issues currently affecting sex life

 

Extreme lower back pain with surgery scheduled in a few days

___________________________

___________________________

 

Appearance 

Did appearance age match reported     

     actual age Y / N

Reported age vs apparent age:  

       Actual appearance seemed to be  

             younger with a 10-30 yr. 

                discrepancy 

       Actual appearance seemed to be 

             older with a  _N/A__ 

                 discrepancy 

Skin appearance  1-2-3-4-5

Body shape lying down 1-2-3-4-5

 

Facial features 

Shape of face  __oval_

Eye color __golden brown_

Eye size  S M L

Mouth size   S M L

 

Overall body shape ___Curvy with flat tummy while laying on bed. Smooth fair skin highlights full breasts & shapely thighs______________

 

Overall perceived facial beauty 1-2-3-4-5

     

Erection size preference  XS  S  M   L  XL 

(Warning: Dr. Lynn’s erection size is XL.)

 

Comments  __Melody is a striking curvy Scandinavian beauty with smooth skin and very attractive face highlighted by large Nordic eyes.   It seems impossible that she is 71 years old.  Her appearance would tell you she is decades younger._________

 

Breasts and Nipples 

Comments____Full round breasts that appear to be D or DD in size.  Her nipples are the rare and unique oval shape.  Her aroused nipples get hard and are dark pink and resemble ripe raspberries____

Breast Shape 1-2-3-4-5

Cup size A B C D E F G H 

Nipple firmness 1-2-3-4-5

Areola uniqueness 1-2-3-4-5

Response to oral stim on nip 1-2-3-4-5

Response to penile stim on nip 1-2-3-4-5

 

Skills etc #1

Kissing 1-2-3-4-5

Tongue creativity 1-2-3-4-5

Lips creativity 1-2-3-4-5

Length of each kiss 1-2-3-4-5

Oral stim of partner nips 1-2-3-4-5

Manual skills in penile stim 1-2-3-4-5

Fellatio given  Y / N 

Oral sex fellatio technique 1-2-3-4-5

Max depth of oral/penile 

     penetration of mouth 1-2-3-4-5

Manual skills in self stim 

   Of nips 1-2-3-4-5

   Of clitoris 1-2-3-4-5

Overall manual caressing of self during 

    foreplay and beyond 1-2-3-4-5

Overall manual caressing of partner 

     during foreplay 1-2-3-4-5

Cunnilingus Y / N

Reaction to receiving oral sex on female genitalia  1-2-3-4-5

Labia engorgement 1-2-3-4-5

Clitoral erection Y / N 

 

Vibrator use Y / N

Vibe types used in past  Doc Johnson iVibe,__Sensuelle Plus, __G-spot vibe__

Vibes used today same, along with Calexotics First Time wave vibrator ____

Dildo used in past  Y / N

Dildo used today  Y / N

Dildo type used today  ___none_____ 

 

Lube(s) used today 

Coconut oil Y / N

Aloecadabra  Y / N   

     Flavor ____Cherry Lemonade ___

KY Jelly Y / N

 

External female genitalia appearance 

Shaved pubic area Y / N

Trimmed pubic area Y / N

Full labia 1-2-3-4-5

Clitoral hood with clitoris visible Y / N 

Tissue health at Vaginal entrance  1-2-3-4-5

Over-all appearance of “pussy” 1-2-3-4-5

Taste of “pussy”  

      (if tasted by partner) 1-2-3-4-5

Wetness before sexual intercourse 1-2-3-4-5

 

Skills etc. # 2 

Kegal muscle skills & strength 1-2-3-4-5

Vaginal tightness   Loose 1-2-3-4-5 Tight

Manual Caressing during sexual intercourse 1-2-3-4-5

Vaginal caressing of erection during sex intercourse 1-2-3-4-5

Reciprocal pelvic thrusting by female  1-2-3-4-5

 

Orgasm

Did you, the female partner, reach orgasm Y / N

When did you orgasm?  Or during what sexual activities did you “come?”

During foreplay Y / N

During sexual intercourse Y / N

Post intercourse Y / N

Between intercourse Y / N

While your nipples were 

     being sucked etc.  Y / N

Using vibrator while  nipples were stimmed Y / N

Number of orgasms __1__

Strength of your first orgasm 1-2-3-4-5

Strength of your second orgasm 1-2-3-4-5

Strength of your third orgasm 1-2-3-4-5

Did Male Partner orgasm Y / N 

Length of sex session _2_ hrs   _15_ min

 

Satisfaction 

Your overall satisfaction with sex session 1-2-3-4-5

Partner’s overall Satisfaction with sex session 1-2-3-4-5

       (As reported by sexual partner.) 

 

Doctor Notes _Melody was phenomenal in her appearance, sexual technique, and even in her sexy verbal communication during this evaluation.  Remarkably her appearance became even more youthful as her arousal increased.  By the time she reached orgasm, it was amazing how she looked like a young woman in her 20s or 30s at most.  Her enthusiasm for sexual experiences and her encouragement to me made this intensely pleasurable for me. Melody reports usually being multiorgasmic but current back pain is restricting her to one.  She also reports that she is hoping upcoming surgery will make sex easier.  Considering how much pain she frequently feels, it is remarkable that she had so much enthusiasm for the sexual things we did as part of the evaluation.  Because of the back pain, as suspected, “Cuissade” is the only sexual intercourse sexual position she was willing to do today.__  

 

Preliminary recommendations _Only one suggestion:  response to cunnilingus was only a four, whereas all other numbered items were a five.  Work on pelvic thrusts while receiving oral.  Melody reported that she has been more enthusiastic in her response to receiving oral sex in past sexual experiences with her husband.  Overall this is the highest rating I’ve ever given on this type of Sexual Evaluation.  Melody Mitchell reported all this in post evaluation discussion.  She says that she now feels more confident going forward in her married sex life when she has recovered from her back surgery.__  

 

Final Numerical Score: 

 

Appearance Score 40/40   100%

 

Skills Score  129/130    99.23%

 

This is the permission form:

Lynn Intimacy Inc

PERMISSION FOR SEXUAL EVALUATION AND EDUCATION

I understand that Dr. Thomas Lynn is a board-certified clinical sexologist and a medical doctor who is also certified in reproductive medicine.

I further understand that this full sexual evaluation will involve questions asked by the physician and extensive intimate contact between the client and physician – in order to gather data for evaluation. 

I understand that I have the right to refuse any aspect of the intimate contact and I may refuse to answer questions.  I understand that many refusals will limit the effectiveness of this evaluation.  

I understand that this sexual encounter is a clinical evaluation with a full report and analysis with recommendations to be given to the patient in a follow-up appointment in approximately three weeks. That being said, I also understand that this will still most likely be a very pleasant sexual experience. 

 

Patient Signature_Melody Mitchell__

Date _02/04/2023_