Shower Power

This is an excerpt from my ebook Working His Way Back:

… The next morning Erin decided to take a high-speed walk after the kids got on their school buses. Eric’s new leaner body inspired her to exercise more. She thought a little toning couldn’t hurt. She took a thirty-minute speed walk before preparing for work. All she could think about as she was walking was Eric! She was recalling his arms… his chest… his abs….  Something had been stirred in her, and she could not quell it. When she finished her speed walk, she heard Eric working in his home office as she was headed toward the stairs. Why was he up working so early, she wondered?

“Getting an early start?” she said as she entered his office.

“Yeah. Jim wants a mid-morning meeting today. That’s kind of’ unusual for him, so I thought I’d dot some i’s and cross some t’s before I went in today,” Eric responded. “Did you enjoy your morning burn?”

“Yeah. It feels good to get my blood pumping early in the morning,” she said. “Okay. Well, sorry to interrupt. I’m going to head upstairs to get ready for work now.”

What am I doing, she asked herself? Why am I acting so silly around him? It’s only Eric, not some stranger. Okay, Erin, she told herself. Go and get ready for work and get on with the rest of your day. You do not have time for this now, she chided herself. She marched up the stairs and headed straight into the bathroom. She walked into the steamy enclosed shower and sighed as the hot water drenched her naked body. She took her time lathering her body and enjoying the flowery scent of the soap. She began to hum as she enjoyed her morning shower.

Eric had long finished dotting his i’s before Erin returned from her workout. He was waiting on her. Waiting on this moment. He could hear the water running and her humming, so he knew she was still in the shower.

“Okay, Eric Matthews, this is not just some stunt. This is about your marriage,” he said aloud to himself, as he paced his office floor. “It’s now or never.” He knew he didn’t have much time, so he ran up the stairs and into their bedroom. He immediately stripped off his navy pajama pants, took a deep breath, and headed into the bathroom… naked. He closed the door behind him, and kept his eyes glued on Erin. She really is a beautiful woman, he observed. He took an extra few seconds to watch her rub soap over her wet skin. He was moving toward the shower when Erin finally turned around and noticed him.

“Eric. You startled me. What are you doing in here?” Erin questioned him puzzled. They usually gave each other his or her privacy in the mornings. But he said nothing. He just kept advancing toward the shower until he reached its transparent glass door.

“Eric, you know I don’t have time for that in the morning. I need to get to work,” she started, thinking that she knew what he wanted. But he still said nothing. He just opened the shower door and stepped inside.

“Why are you doing this? You know we don’t do things like ‘sex in the morning shower’,” she questioned again. Or anytime in the shower, she thought to herself. What in the hell is he doing, she thought?

Still mute, he put his hands on both sides of her nape and pulled her in to kiss her. She automatically parted her lips to receive his kiss. But, this kiss was not gentle. This kiss was full of passion and seemingly repressed emotion. When he finally pulled back she was panting. He kissed down her face and neck with fervor that matched the first kiss.

As he continued to move down her body, she prepared to shift her arms to block his mouth from kissing her breasts. But before she could block him, he firmly grasped her wrists and held them by her side. It almost seemed as though he was expecting her to block him. He did not attempt to kiss her breast, though. Instead, he continued his path between them, kissing as he descended. Erin was a bit taken aback when he grabbed her wrists, and even more so when he did not attempt to kiss her breast.

Her concerns were quickly abandoned as he continued downward, and she realized what he was going to do. He had never kissed her there before. Never. Their sex life, even before “the incident,” existed but was not very adventurous. She had an urge to protest, but she was frozen. When Eric was on his knees, inches away from her clit, he inhaled deeply and moaned with pleasure. She began to tingle all over, but especially where he was inhaling.

“I love the way you smell. You smell like ‘you’,” he breathed. Now, it was Erin’s turn to say nothing. She was still frozen in place. He placed one hand on her abdomen and gently pushed her against the shower wall, while putting her leg on his shoulder with the other hand. She did not resist. Hmm. No resistance, he smiled to himself. He moved his hand from her abdomen and parted her lips with his fingers. Then he licked her upward, gently but firmly.

She gasped at the feel of his tongue on her clitoris. He moaned again in pleasure. He paused and then he licked her again. It was as if he was taking the time to really experience the moment. Then he began to lick her clit slowly, but insistently. She gasped again and grabbed his hair. Her emotions told her to stop him, but her body had other plans. She pulled his head closer, and that was all the indication he needed.

“That’s right, baby. I know you want this, too,” he panted. They never really talked during sex, but he was taking a chance. He always wanted to, and he believed that she would like it. All the guys in those books she read did it, and she was buying those things left and right.

He continued to lick and suck her from her perineum to the tip of her clit. He started slowly, but quickly began to devour her at a rapid pace. At first, all she would do was moan, but her body began to take control from her mind. She began to undulate her pelvis, grinding her pussy against his mouth as he worked her into a feverish fit.

“Yeah, baby. Let go,” he growled. “Oh, you taste so good. I knew you would taste good.”

Erin had her eyes closed from pleasure, but she opened them and looked down at him when she noticed that he shifted. He looked so sexy eating her pussy. Then he did something that promised to send her hurling toward her orgasm. He began to masturbate while licking her. She didn’t have a good view, but it was obvious what he was doing. Watching him rub himself while pleasuring her was enough to make her come apart.

“Oh, Erin. I love your pussy!” he moaned between licks and sucks. “I love my pussy.”

“My pussy… My pussy,” he continued to repeat like a mantra between licks and sucks. Then he began to focus on her orgasm, concentrating on her clit. He moved his pursed lips side to side and around and around over her engorged clit. Faster and faster. All the while, stroking on his cock at the same pace.

“Eric! Oh my g…. I’m coming,” she panted and grabbed the bar in the shower as hard as she could. “I’m coming. Oh please. I’m… Oh! Oh!” She grasped a handful of his dark, wet mass of curls again and pulled his head as close as she could.

“Yeah. Come for me, baby,” he got out between sucks, spurring her on to her climax. No sound could leave her throat as she pummeled through her orgasm. His speed never abated as she continued to ride the waves of ecstasy. He spurted something inaudible while his lips were thoroughly imbedded on her body, and then he came with a ferociousness that she had not seen from him. He licked and swallowed her juices as though they were life-giving. He continued to enjoy her essence, even after they had both come.

They stayed in the shower in the same position until Eric was able to gather some of his composure. When he finally rose, he tilted Erin’s chin up and kissed her lovingly. She tasted herself on his lips. He turned around and got out of the shower. He wrapped a towel around his waist and left her standing in the shower.

Erin stood in the shower motionless. It was not until the water began to feel cooler that she moved. When was the last time she had an orgasm with him, she thought? Usually, she was alone when she had one of those. Maybe before she became pregnant with Ellie? She wasn’t sure. She knew it had been well before she caught him, because they had gotten complacent early into the marriage. She got out of the shower and worked to regain herself. She’d let go of her control without warning, she thought to herself! Her body seemed to betray her mind.

And when had he learned how to use his mouth like that… his tongue… his lips? He literally licked her into a frenzy. She had too many friends that always complained that their husband or boyfriend could not make them come orally.

Erin had to make herself focus, because she knew she had to go to work. She would not let herself be distracted by the best shower of her life. She smiled and laughed inwardly. It’s gonna be a long day, she mused.

 

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10 replies
  1. Chesed says:

    Steamy in all the good ways. You two are in for great times: cunnilingus is the best! But I have one question: how could Eric talk sentences when things were ramping up? At least for me, I find that I can't lift my tongue from heaven; words would be nothing more than mumbles.

  2. Mitch L says:

    He interrupts himself so he can verbally express his thoughts. Since women usually buy written erotica much more than men do, I have to cater to my audience. Many of my friends complain that they would love their husband to talk to them more during sex. Just giving them what they want.

  3. Adam Rose says:

    Speaking from personal experience. The only way to become a better writer is to write, write, write and then after, write some more.
    Also read as many books as you can so you get exposed to all the different styles.
    I love fiction. Especially "what if" stories that really make you stretch your imagination into the realm of, "wow! What if that really could happen in real life?"
    Ps. Great snippet! Keep writing.?

  4. Harper Shelby Thornton says:

    Hot! I loved the part when he said "come for me, baby" and she came, mostly because it reminds of my passionate times with my hubby. I might just show this to him! 😉 God bless

  5. Mitch L says:

    Thank you for all of your feedback. I really appreciate it. I can't ask people around me for advice because I write under a pen name, (my job couldn't handle it) and my hubby is biased. Besides, he just gets worked up when he reads it. That part's nice, though.

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