Ode To You + Today’s Lovemaking Session

(L) – This story contains strong language. 

This poem was written to my wife. If you don’t care for poetry or my poetry then skip to the story.  The story is all true.  The poem is based on our shared past of a 30+ year marriage.  Those MHers who have read my 134 MH stories will probably get most of the poem’s references. I think the poem has some depth but it has some humor too.  It definitely is an erotic poem.

This story contains erotic words but they are not used as expletives.

 

ODE TO YOU

When we met I first noticed your big eyes

Beautiful full of truth and not lies

With you I felt at home

A peace I’d never known

A peace that money never ever buys

 

I really value how you are kind

With a deeply amazing mind

We both loved science

And soon developed reliance

A better match we could never find

 

We also share a love of the Lord

We both love his sacred inspiring Word

His love does astound us

It is all around us

And His guidance is something we’ve heard

 

We felt that He put us together

We clearly are birds of a feather

Together for all time

I am yours you are mine

I’ll be your husband and lover forever

 

Our friendship finally led to rising lust

I loved the shape of your full shapely bust

It was fine with God

For me to admire your bod

But we abstained as a matter of trust

 

Our first kiss was in the canyon of rock

As our lips first passionately locked

Fireworks went off in my head

Next day I proposed that we wed

At that choice I never ever have balked

 

When you first saw my dick you named him Fred

It was on our wedding night bed

(Later) You gave me your cherry

And then I did bury

My dick in your virgin pussy that bled

 

Your deflowering was really the next day

At 5:30 you woke me for sexual play

Let’s DO this you said

Laying nude on the bed

The memory’s still so vivid today

 

Now God approves of our married sexy fun

Our passion is clearly second to none

Our sexual love

Blessed by God up above

We’ve had a great 30-year sexy run

 

And now for the power of your boobs

Sucking on either one makes you lube

Your pussy gets as wet

As a pussy can get

So my dick can thrust deep into your tube

 

Your tits drive me incredibly wild

And this is putting it very mild

There is a connection

From your tits to my erection

Your boobs get me sexually riled

 

You have a most glorious pussy

You’re beautiful, sexy, and bushy

I do love the taste

Of your sex’s sweet place

And making your twat go all gushy

 

How your pussy caresses my dick

With your sexy Kegel muscle trick

You caress my cock with passion

In a way sexy fashion

It’s great how our bodies can mutually click

 

I’m your committed sexy loving man

I’ll fuck you for as long as I can

Though health problems are scary

We both are very very

Happy to have in your pussy my big cock crammed

 

Making love is still found in wild fuck

I love watching your orgasmic buck

Our sex is periodic

And it’s very erotic

Every three days our nipples will get sucked

 

You drive me wild with your sexy lips

You really can make me flip

On my small man nips

Or on my dick’s turgid tip

You’ve given me many orgasmic trips

 

Remember you were first my friend

I’ll love you until the very end

Of my mortal life

You’ll always be my wife

And our eternal bond will never end

 

TRUE STORY:

NEARLY DEAD BUT LOVING LIKE NEWLYWEDS

My oxygen concentrator alarm went off at 5:30 this morning.  I hate it when that happens because sometimes I can’t get back to sleep.  Today was one of those days.  So, I decided to finish this poem to my wife.  I had started it the day before.

At 7:00 a.m. I got up to walk the dog. My Melody beat me to the shower and so I shaved until she finished.

We soon met nude on the bed with Anne Murray love songs playing and the bedroom lit up by a soft bedside lamp and halite lamps.  Needless to say Melody looked scrumptious.  But I chose to not read the poem to her quite yet.

She had one of the microfiber cloths we use for cleanup between and partly covering her beautiful boobies so I took a picture of those two lovely ladies.

We then started with me telling Melody how gorgeous she is.  “It’s like being married to a soft porcelain goddess,” I told her as I gently ran my palm all over her shapely, soft torso.  Her nipples went hard immediately so I focused on rubbing them. Then as we began our kissing, I squeezed her full left breast with my right hand.

I handed Melody a freshly charged mini wand vibe.  She began buzzing her clit and pushing the head of the wand somewhat into her pussy entrance.  (That is so sexy to watch!)  I again looked at my marvelous view down her beautiful sexy body.  I then dived back into pleasuring her hard nipples—one nipple with my hand and fingers and the other with my mouth.  I tongue flicked and sucked and even gave her titty some light love bites.

Then I read the new sexy poem to Melody.  She complains about my erotic poetry, but I know it gets her engine started.  Then we went back at it with Melody using her vibrator we call Loopy because it has a looped handle.

After several more lovely erotic minutes, she insisted it was HER turn.

“You wanna suck and love on my man-nipples?” I asked rhetorically.

“YES!” she growled. As she pushed me over, she added, “The little one said roll over!”

“I love how you love sucking my nipples—as much as I love sucking on yours!” I said as Melody’s lips latched onto my left nipple.

During the next pleasure-filled minutes, her lips loved on my nips, and we took turns pumping my erection.  Seeing and feeling my growing size and hardness while pumping my rod, she said, “If you can cum, you should!”

But first I sat up and leaned over her sex.  She opened her legs, and I probed through her silky bush.  Melody helped me out by reaching down to spread open her vulva.  Lately she wants me to just focus on her clitty.  My tongue found her already-hard love button and, I licked to my heart’s content!  Melody doesn’t come from receiving oral, but me licking any part of her pussy is a surefire way to guarantee she’ll have an orgasm later in the lovemaking session.

“I want to try missionary position,” I said after my clitty snack. “I know it won’t work for long, but let’s try.  I love it when you draw your knees up to your chest and my cock can go really deep into your pussy.”

Melody agreed to try missionary position, but it didn’t work out.  We don’t do that position much anymore because multiple health problems for both of us make it nearly impossible. Oh well. I just remember the Shania Twain lyrics, “It’s not having what you want, it’s wanting what you’ve got,” meaning we need to be grateful for what we CAN still do.  And we are!

Neither of us were upset; we just moved on.  I slid to Melody’s left side and began to orally work her tit over.  She had switched to her bullet vibe and was buzzing her clitoris as I loved on her boob.

In a short time I was ready to return to spelunking inside her wet and eager cave of wonders.  Her breasts, as the poem says, have a direct connection to my erection.  Melody noticed that I was even harder than before and repeated, “Remember, if you can you, should.”  Then she sexily added, “I want Tommy to fuck me!  I want Tommy to fuck my pussy!”

That sexy talk ramped me up even more!  I slid into our X position with me on my side and her on her back.  I positioned my tip at her pussy entrance.  Melody said, “Yesss, you’re in the right place.”  I pushed inside her, and we began to fuck like crazy.  She was also buzzing her clit.

Like the poem says, she has a sexy Kegel muscle trick.  She began to give me and my erection the ultimate hug using her Kegel muscles.  Between the Kegel hug and feeling the vibrations through her pussy, I was soon really close!

I could take a trip down memory lane.  Until two years ago we had long, drawn-out intercourse, and we’d almost always cum together.  That is not possible now.  Between my end stage heart failure and side effects of heart meds and Melody’s chemo pills, we need to adapt, and we certainly have.

She also now needs me to be sucking her tit for her to cum.  And I over-stress my bad heart if we fuck for an extended period of time.  So after a short, climactic fuck, I usually cum in her pussy.  And then I’ll slide up and latch onto her tit and really enjoy myself while working over both nipples.  This is very enjoyable for my Melody because usually she cums and cums hard!

Now back to this morning…

So, when my wife started giving my cock even more of the ultimate hug, I increased the speed of my thrusts.  It was a powerful, pleasurable, pounding fuck—but yes, it was still making love!

The sensations were out of this world as her pussy squeezed my shaft and my glans.  Then I exploded my semen inside her pulsating pussy!  I KNEW she was primed to cum!

So I moved to suck and love on her tits some more.  Often the rambunctious fucking has her ready, and she’ll cum in 15-20 seconds.  But today was a long haul—but a very pleasant one.

As we fucked each other, I had prayed that I’d know what to do to help Melody to reach a nice orgasm.  Now I felt to move from one nipple to the other, but she wasn’t getting there.  And all the tit touching and my memory of the pussy pounding we’d just done got me hard again rather quickly.  So I kneeled up beside Melody’s breasts.  I rubbed a little coconut oil on her near nipple and began to pump my penis while my tip rubbed her tit and nipple.  Soon my precum joined the nipple party!

Oh my goodness!! Me rubbing my tip on her nipple felt awesome, and watching what it did to her was even more amazing.  She began to breathe deeper and emit sighs of deep pleasure.  Then Melody’s whole body tensed up, and her back arched off the bed as if to push her tit harder into my cock.  She had a long-awaited, powerful, body-shaking orgasm!  She is more beautiful than ever when she is in the throes of orgasm—and for hours afterwards!  Today was no exception.

“Aw,” I said, “I wanted to cum simultaneously on your titties!”

“But then Julia would feel cheated!” joked Melody.  (Julia is her name for the vibrating stroker she bought me last year.)  Before I lubed Julia up, I leaned over.

“What are you doing?” asked Melody.

“Cleaning up the mess!” I replied.  Then I licked her boob clean, especially her nipple and areola.  I was surprised by how much precum I got.  But I was so wound up that I suppose I shouldn’t have been surprised.  After all, I had got to do some serious pussy fucking and extended tit sucking!

“You are such a great fucking wife!” I exclaimed. Because she IS really good at fucking!

We ended the sex session with Melody again sucking MY nipple and Julia (the vibrating stroker) bringing me to another great orgasm!

Yes, I would have liked to have fucked her for like 15-20 minutes but after cumming in her pussy today and making her gushy, then getting to titilate her tits for a loooonng time, I can’t complain.  I’ll admit that I am obsessed with her beauty and especially her sexy breasts!  I even know that some people would not see her as attractive, but I couldn’t care less what they think.

I see her as beautiful on every level.  She is kind and intelligent and so caring.  I’m sure that enhances her physical appearance to me.

Not bad for a loving senior couple that qualifies as not newlyweds but rather nearly dead!  And ya know what? We are so thankful to Heavenly Father for being able to still have such beautiful and erotic sexual sharing in our marriage.

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7 replies
  1. KingdomMan says:

    As always LM, I find your stories inspirational. The love, care, and devotion you and Melody have for each other clearly shines through.
    And despite having severe health problems, you power through, seeking to give pleasure to each other. You adapt to the situation instead of giving up because of it.
    I can’t speak for everyone, but I want what you and Melody have in terms of the relentless pursuit of each other. I think it exemplifies what Christ intended for marriage.
    Blessings to you and Melody my friend.
    KM

    • LovingMan says:

      KingdomMan that may be one of the nicest comments I’ve ever gotten on Marriage Heat. Thank you so much.

      Although for myself I write sexy fictional novellas, most of my posts on MH are of Melody’s ‘n my real sexual experiences together. I hope these true stories give younger MHers hope for their future. I also hope our stories are inspiring. (And educational!)

      MH stories have certainly been inspiring for us. That includes many of your MH stories as well. The ideas we get from MH stories and discussions have definitely enhanced our sexual and emotional connection!

      I’ve enjoyed the love poems I’ve read on Marriage Heat. I really wish there were more. My multi-limerick sexy poems are certainly fun for me to write.

  2. LovelyLonelyLady says:

    Beautiful and humorous poem and very hot story! As always, I'm moved by the beauty and fortitude of your lovemaking in spite of age and health problems. It gives me much hope that I can someday have that even though I too have many health concerns.

    It's amazing that Melody can cum from breast/nipple stimulation. So far I haven't found much sensation in my breasts, but I do think it's a case of not getting enjoyment like when you scratch your own back. I am REALLY looking forward to feeling my future husband's hands and mouth and cock on my breasts (though they're too small for him to tit-fuck me). That will probably feel way better than my own touch.

    Again, thank you for this sweet episode. My prayers often go up for you and your wife, and everyone else on MH.

    • LovingMan says:

      Hi LLL. Just so you know, I pray for you too. Thanks for your kind comments.

      To clarify, Melody usually comes when I’m loving on her nipples AND she’s buzzing her clitoris with one of her vibrators. In fact sometimes she has a G spot vibe inside and simultaneously uses a bullet vibe on the outside- on her clit.

      As far as what starts ‘n revs your motor – remember that every person is unique. I pray that you’ll get the opportunity for marriage so you can feel the complete experience and satisfaction of a good marriage and God-sanctioned sex. But know that marriage also takes a lot of work, patience, & forgiveness.

  3. LexusWillXxX says:

    LovingMan, what you and your wife share is absolutely beautiful. To be married for 30+ years is amazing and to still be finding ways to make sexual intimacy still work is a treasure. I always joke to my wife saying when I am 90 lord willing, that I would still be trying to make love to her even if I have to hold myself up with a walker. My wife doesn’t cum from me giving her oral as well. She enjoys it but it’s not her endgame to a climax. Love the way you described your Melody making your way through her silky bush. I wouldn’t say my beautiful Lexus has a bush but she is natural and keeps a light trim and I get so turned on when I get to run my tongue through it to reach her clit…….. I wish you and your Melody many more years of sweet love making. Thank you for sharing.

  4. LovingMan says:

    LWXxX, thanks for your complimentary comments. With so many stories about how the wife cums during cunninlingus it’s nice to know there are other couples like us.

    We too hope to be loving on each other as long as we can. We’ve definitely had to adjust but we strive to be grateful for what we CAN still do.

    • LexusWillXxX says:

      I can’t agree more, you’re a true inspiration. Thank you for your stories. And yes, so many stories all the time about the woman cumming and cumming through cunnilingus. And people would probably think well you’re not doing it right to your wife. That is the furthest thing from the truth. Women as you know require different stimulations. She has enjoyed me going down on her more so then in our past 8 years married which I am beyond grateful for bc I love her taste smell and natural hair to explore through any chance I can get. But my wife needs different stimulation. She has always used a vibrator wand on her clit as a way to relax while I thrust her with my thick member. Child birth vaginally has helped her to where intercourse doesn’t hurt her anymore. But people also always think and hear that big dicks is what woman want or need to get off. That’s false as well bc my wife can easily or get off easier by just shallow penetration from my finger. The Lord has blessed each and every one of us to have different needs. Can’t imagine how boring the world would be if we was all the same. My wife just wishes woman could have been created to get off as easy as a man can. 😂

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