Obey by Moonlight (L)
(L) – This story contains strong language.
*** Additional note: some acts and attitudes described in this story may appear degrading or disrespectful. However, this couple has previously established that they engage in this form of sexual play voluntarily, and to their mutual enjoyment, as a part of the Dominant/submissive dynamic they have in their marriage.
The last glimmer of sunlight died on the horizon as a warm evening breeze teased strands of her hair. It carried the scents of grilled fish and sea salt across the tables set directly on the beach sand, just thirty metres from the sea at Cala Carbó.
Andrea sat in a flowing linen dress skirt, braless, her dark areolas showing faintly through the light fabric. She savoured her final sip of crisp white wine as night fell quickly. The little beach bar was almost empty apart from the quiet shuffle of a few straggling couples departing up the beach and the staff clearing the last few tables.
Gabriel watched her, dark eyes steady, amused by the flush of wine and sun on her cheeks. He leaned closer, thumb brushing her wrist, and murmured.
Gabriel spoke low enough for only her to hear. “Come with me.”
Andrea’s eyes flared open instantly at the delicious, commanding tone, utterly aware of the way the mood had changed. Those three simple words made her chest tighten. Her areolas contracted and her nipples pebbled beneath the thin linen. That shift into his dominance made her instantly wet—that tone reinforced his power in their dynamic.
“Yes, sir,” she whispered, her explicit consent to his command. The flutter in her belly sparked like a carnival high striker game, an electric pulse shooting up through her body to her mind and slamming back down to her mound with a thud.
They stepped off the beach onto the rough pebbles, their shoes crunching against them. The stones pressed through Andrea’s sandals as they walked toward the far curve of the cove, where a single narrow path, worn smooth by countless feet, cut up the cliff face to half a dozen sunbathing terraces that peppered the edge of the cliff and the water.
The path itself seemed to invite secrets—a discreet thread along the cliff, offering a promise of privacy and adventure. Each terrace was secluded enough that they could not be seen from the beach or the other alcoves, making it ideal for daytime nudists and deliciously deserted for couples at night. Each terrace had its access to the water, either by rock-cut steps or ladders bolted directly to the boulders.
Small tufts of sea grass pushed through the cracks, and the faint smell of seaweed lingered. As Andrea followed Gabriel along the path, she breathed in the night air, the scent of pine trees drifting down from the top of the cliffs, blending with the salt air to create a heady perfume unique to Ibiza. The dark shapes of the pines leaned over the path, their needles rustling quietly in the faint breeze, adding another layer of wildness to the mood.
Gabriel chose a terrace flanked by two large boulders that fed onto a smooth rock. The water was inky and dark, and the moonlight caught the ripples as they gently lapped at the edge.
From the ledge, they were completely hidden from the beach. Gabriel, hard with desire from watching Andrea’s nipples through dinner, stripped off his shorts in one decisive move.
“Everything off,” he commanded in that deep, dominant tone.
Andrea instantly obeyed, slipping the linen dress off her shoulders, revealing her sun-kissed body. Her dark nipples stood hard and proud in the night air. She stepped free of her knickers, exposed and vulnerable, goosebumps rising across her skin as Gabriel nodded with approval.
“In,” he ordered again, his voice firm, leaving no room for hesitation.
Gabriel launched himself from the ledge in a single graceful arc, slicing into the dark water like a blade. The sea swallowed him, inky and cold, momentarily blotting him from view before he surged back to the surface, powerful strokes carrying him to a submerged boulder the size of a car. That boulder had been their secret for years, a landmark only those who had swum this cove might know, a hidden place reclaimed by their summer trysts for decades. Gabriel stood shoulder deep and waited as the moonlight slicked across the hard cut of his chest.
Andrea lingered on the ledge, toes digging into the stone, fear battling desire. The chill of the water nipped at her ankles, the night air kissed her bare skin, and goosebumps rippled in waves across her arms. Gabriel’s dark silhouette claimed the rock like a king, steady and unshakable.
His voice sliced through the hush.
“Get in. Now.”
That tone—low, dark and unyielding—shot straight through her as a current of heat and fear, tangling in her belly and sparking between her legs. Andrea felt a jolt of excitement so sharp it almost hurt. He was in control, and she loved him to be that way.
She took one breath, then another, summoning the courage to obey.
“In!” he said, his tone now growing in frustration and anger.
Andrea stepped forward; the cold crept up her calves, thighs, and over her mound, stealing her breath in a quick, panicked gasp. Her nipples tightened to painful peaks, exposed and sensitive, and every nerve seemed to come alive at once.
Andrea hesitated no longer as she reached the edge, her heart hammering as she saw Gabriel’s glare, dark and potent. She dove under, the water closing over her like a shock of midnight ice. She came up sputtering, coughing out a laugh of relief and surrender.
Gabriel stood on the boulder, watching, hunger written all over him, his cock already hard and ready.
“Come here, slut,” he commanded, voice rough and low.
She pushed through the swirling water, each movement brushing her breasts and stomach against the night-chilled sea. The moonlight danced on the ripples, caressing her skin like a gentle touch. Gabriel’s hands caught her waist as she reached him, yanking her up against his body, crushing her to him. His mouth claimed hers in a fierce, almost bruising kiss, tasting of salt, of wine, of dark promises.
“You filthy little slut,” he growled into her mouth, “sitting through dinner, teasing me with those hard nipples, showing them off under that dress like a prize.”
Andrea whimpered, shame and desire colliding in her chest, making her thighs clench and her cunt pulse.
“Yes, sir,” she gasped, dizzy with need.
“Did you think I wouldn’t notice? That I wouldn’t punish you for tempting me?” he rasped, one hand squeezing her breast so hard it sent a shock through her, a wet sound breaking from her throat.
She couldn’t speak, only nod, as the waves rocked them around the boulder, cool water lapping at their waists, the night wrapping around them like a dark cloak.
“Kiss me again,” he commanded, and she obeyed without hesitation, pouring every ounce of hunger into the way she met his lips, open-mouthed, desperate.
Gabriel broke the kiss first; his voice edged with iron.
“Spread your legs. Let me feel how hot you are.”
Andrea obeyed, heat prickling every inch of her skin as she opened herself to him. Gabriel’s fingers slid between her folds, brushing through the slick, tight petals of her sex, finding her hot and ready despite the cold.
“My filthy slut,” he murmured approvingly, slipping two thick fingers into her without any warm-up, the cold water making the stretch almost painfully sharp. The pain excited Andrea, making her clench around him, a moan tearing from her throat as his fingers curled deep inside her.
“Good slut,” he murmured approvingly, curling to touch the roof of her vagina. Andrea moaned, her head dropping to his shoulder, her legs trembling with the force of the pleasure that spiked through her like a live current.
“Stroke me,” he growled, voice trembling with restraint. “A good slut sees to her master.”
“Yes, sir,” she breathed into his neck. Her hand wrapping around the thick shaft of his cock, stroking dutifully at first, then boldly as he filled her palm.
“Harder,” he commanded, teeth grazing her ear.
She obeyed, working him firmly as his thumb pressed to her clit, circling in slow, tormenting sweeps that made her gasp and clutch at his shoulders. Each movement made the sea swirl against their bodies, pushing them closer together in a rhythm older than words, as if the tide itself craved their secrets.
Gabriel held her steady, guiding her strokes, his lips brushing her ear with hot, filthy encouragement:
“Tell me who owns this cunt,” he growled, making her thighs quake.
Andrea answered at once, breathless, “You do, sir. You own me. All of me.”
His thumb stayed at her clit as he kept finger-fucking her with relentless firmness, the cold still biting around his knuckles. Andrea felt the burn, almost too much to bear, but the pain twisted into raw pleasure. She rocked against him, one hand still working his cock, the other clinging to his shoulder as the water slapped between them. Each thrust of his fingers forced her breath out in a moan; each swirl of his thumb made her body jolt. It was brutal, delicious, and perfect.
Gabriel felt her grinding on his hand, teasing close to release, and hissed, “Do you think you can come first?”
Andrea shook her head, gasping, “No, sir, master decides my orgasm.”
He smiled darkly, proud of her obedience. With a final cruel curl of his fingers, Gabriel lifted her by her pussy until she rose onto her toes in the surf, pressing hard against her clit, a painful wave of sensation shot through her body like lightning. Andrea gasped, tears springing to her eyes, the pain exciting her in its ferocity.
Then he released her, satisfied, and pulled back.
“Swim back to the ledge and face the cliff,” he ordered, his tone low and possessive. “My slut will spread her legs and open her cheeks for me.”
“Yes, sir.”
Andrea swam to the water’s edge, climbing up on her knees to haul herself up onto the stony platform. Standing, she waited, thigh-deep, up to the face of the boulder, placing her forehead and hands against its rough, bleached surface. She listened as Gabriel swam up behind her, climbed up and shook himself off. Andrea’s mind spun with submission, a heady mix of dread and arousal surging through her. She felt almost relieved to give in to him completely, the rough stone under her palms reminding her there was no escape—and no desire to run.
Gripping her neck firmly, he pushed her forward until her chest bent down low and her face pressed sideways onto the rocks. Vulnerability made her belly twist with shame and heat. She heard his breath change as he stepped back, hungry and ordered,
“Spread your cheeks for me.”
Andrea obeyed, exposing her tight, puckered arsehole, pale and clenched from the cold water, and her slick, swollen slit, glistening and eager. The raw exposure made her stomach flutter with humiliation and an illicit pride, a trembling heat spreading through her limbs as she presented herself so openly to him. Gabriel drank in the sight, possessive and cruel.
“Look at you,” he sneered, “showing your holes to your master.”
Andrea moaned, mind reeling.
“Tell me who owns this cunt,” he demanded.
“You do, sir,” she gasped.
The wind carried off her voice, eyes squeezed shut as the cold water clung to their joined flesh, making each jolt of sensation more vivid. Bent so low, the waves reached her nipples, chilling them into stiff peaks while Gabriel moved behind her, relishing the sight of her so helplessly exposed.
“Such a good little slut, parading those nipples through dinner like bait, you cheap whore,” he growled. “You knew I’d take you like this, didn’t you, my fuck toy?”
“Yes, sir,” Andrea gasped, her mind fracturing into pure submission, each degrading word sinking into her bones like a brand.
Gabriel didn’t hesitate. His hands dug into her hips so hard they’d leave bruises, jerking her back as he rammed forward in a punishing, savage thrust.
Andrea’s cry, half-shocked, half-aroused, echoed over the rocks. She sensed in him a sudden switch, from playful dominance to something far more primal and extreme, and a thrill shot through her. The darker side of him excited her even as it scared her, turning her into pure submission. She had been enjoying their playful dynamic, but Gabriel was too worked up now, letting his excitement spill into something rougher and darker, catching her off guard. Her scream echoed over the rocks as he plunged himself deeply into her heat.
Her pussy clenched violently around his cock as he drew out and slammed back into her once again. He fucked her with the force of an animal—no softness, no mercy—only brutal, greedy need.
“Take it, you worthless hole,” he snarled, pounding her so deeply she felt the shock of him in her belly. The cold water lapping against their joined flesh gave no mercy from the intensity of his body cracking into hers.
“This is what you’re for, isn’t it? Getting used by your master’s cock.”
“Yes, sir,” she sobbed, the burn of shame mixing with white-hot pleasure as he slammed into her again, harder, rougher.
The waves crashed against her exposed tits, making her nipples sting and throb, the chill only heightening the searing stretch of his cock. Gabriel’s balls slapped her clit, jarring jolts of pain through her overstimulated flesh, dragging another strangled moan from her throat.
He yanked her head back by the hair, forcing her eyes open to the endless black sea rolling and crashing, the salt spray stinging her face as he drove into her. With her hair wrapped tight in his fist, she felt every savage snap of his hips, forcing her to submit, to stay still and endure him. The sea breeze tangled her hair around his knuckles, the cold waves splashing her breasts as he hammered her without pause.
“You love this, don’t you? Being split open like a fucking whore, used and dripping?”
“Yes, sir, I love it,” Andrea cried, voice breaking under the filthy humiliation, her mind fracturing under the relentless, exquisite torture of it.
He drove into her again, making her knees buckle. Her cheek ground painfully against the stone until she felt she might bleed, the raw scrape a counterpoint to the white-hot stretch of her cunt.
“Say it again,” Gabriel growled, voice thick with sadistic pleasure, “tell me who owns this fucking hole.”
“You do, sir; you own me!” she screamed, even though fear prickled that someone might hear them on the rocks. Her voice cracked with the effort, shame and adrenaline spiking through her body, but she shouted it anyway, desperate to please him.
“Fuck your whore’s cunt, master! Fuck it, please,” she sobbed, gasping between tears, her body shaking under the power of his thrusts, her voice desperate with hunger for her body to be used.
He pistoned into her so hard the whole cliff face seemed to shake, the slap of wet flesh echoing through the night, water streaming between her thighs as he forced her to the limit of what she could bear.
At the brink of his release, Gabriel ripped free, pushing her down on her knees with a brutal hand in her hair, twisting until she whimpered. Jerking his cock with his free hand he let it slap across her trembling mouth and face. Raging lust contorted his features, and then thick ropes of hot cum spattered across her eyes, nose and mouth. He watched as his cum marked his property completely.
“Look at you,” he spat, breath ragged, “painted in your master’s filth.”
Andrea moaned, the sticky heat mingling with seawater and tears, her heart pounding with a dark, undeniable pride.
Andrea stayed kneeling, breathing hard, as Gabriel ran his hand through her wet, tangled hair. The rough affection sent a shiver down her, still half-lost in the adrenaline of what he’d just done to her. His cum dripped slowly down her chin, mixing with the seawater, sticky and obscene.
“Clean me up,” Gabriel commanded, voice still dark and hungry, though calmer now.
Andrea obeyed instantly, leaning forward to take him into her mouth again. His cock was softening but still heavy, and she licked along the shaft with deep reverence, gathering every drop of him. The salt of the sea and the tang of him filled her mouth, and she swallowed greedily.
“Good girl,” Gabriel murmured, petting her hair almost tenderly. Andrea flushed at the praise, her nipples still tight and aching from the cold water and rough use. Her cunt throbbed, needy, but she did not dare ask. She had been trained to wait.
He looked down at her, his face softening with a strange kind of fondness. “You did well. Show me.”
Andrea lifted her tongue, showing the gift he had given her, then slowly swallowed it, her eyes fixed on his. The degradation made something profound inside her melt, reminding her why she belonged to him.
“Such a perfect slut,” he praised, wiping a smear of cum from her cheek with his thumb and pushing it between her lips so she could suck it clean.
“Let’s go home,” he said, offering a hand to help her stand. “I’ll finish you properly there.”
Andrea took his hand, rising shakily to her feet, muscles sore and water dripping from her skin. Still, her spirit felt light; she had pleased him. Even though her pleasure burned painfully unmet, she clung to that glow of obedience, ready to follow wherever he led.




Thank you, MH team, for publishing this on my behalf. I know it's long, so I appreciate the flexibility with the rule.
Also I wish my bum still looked as good as the girl in the image, and that MJ looked like him lol 😉
Love Lauren
[From MH: You're welcome! It's no problem at all. In our editing process we found that one section seemed to have been accidentally duplicated, so with that removed, it fell just within the recommended 3,000-word upper limit. So everything worked out fine! Thanks for submitting another scorcher! 🙂 ]
Wow! That was so crazily spicy! While I personally don't enjoy degrading talk, much of Gabriel's tone and dominance was a huge turn-on. And your descriptions are right out of an erotic novel. My pussy was clenching as I read this! So many elements of this story are what I hope to someday experience.
Thank you, Lovely Lonely Lady! I’m so glad you enjoyed it. I know the degrading language isn’t for everyone, but since this was based on real events, I wanted to stay true to the tone and the moment.
And I had to smile at your line about your pussy clenching. I love it when a story hits me that way too. I bet you’ve got quite the wish list tucked away of things you and your future husband will explore. I’ve seen the little hints you drop in your comments here and there, and it sounds like there’s a lot of delicious fun waiting for you.
love Lauren
xxx
It’s stunningly beautiful in a way that most people won’t understand; Gabriel and Andrea offering the other complete and unadulterated access to their innermost desire and need.
You capture this really well and I’m a huge fan of your writing.
I hope more adventures are forthcoming!
Thank you, Kingdom Man.
I think you’re right. People who have followed Gabriel and Andrea’s journey (or Master Joe and mine) really do understand the dynamic and the connection between us. It’s lovely when readers pick up on that depth.
I feel the same about other writers on here, too. Once you’ve read a few of their stories, you start to really know the characters, their rhythms, and what drives them. That’s part of what makes this community so special.
And thank you for all the comments and compliments you’ve given me. They always make me smile.
I actually have a discussion question pending for submission about desires and wishes, and I’m hoping it will give us all some food for thought for more exciting adventures.
With love, as always
Lauren
xxxx
I’m willing to bet that your husband loves the current look of your bum, tits, pussy, & etc.
My wife n I are not into BDSM but this story was sooooo sexy! You not cumming til you got home (or your hotel room) n much of this story reminded me of sex in Nature that my Melody n I have had. The subsequent sex in our bedroom or hotel room or resort room was just as epic. So, I am really hoping for a part 2 to this story.
I love your description of this beautiful hidden spot. Sex in Nature is so memorable!
Thank you, Loving Man.
I love that you and Melody could relate to the setting and that it brought back memories of your own moments together in nature. There’s something unforgettable about being outdoors, feeling the elements against your skin, and letting that energy take over.
And I hope Gabriel does enjoy the current look of my bum. I suspect he prefers it with a faint reminder of where his cane last kissed it. Unfortunately, I caught a bit of a sniffle afterwards and ended up in bed, though not in the good way, for the rest of the evening and the next day. It took a full two days before I could finally orgasm again, but when it happened… mmm, it was worth the wait.
Love Lauren
xxx